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My last poem-[death of dreams]
written by EvilTiger11:48 AM 12/30/04This is my last good-bye,
This is my last work of sh#t,
It never satisfied my dying corpse,
It never help this f#ck up state,
I will give up my f#ck up dreams and die,
I will waste my life in a garbage can like a poor man,
Nobody wants a guitar player in training for metal,
Nobody cares in Raceland in the state of Louisiana,
What a f#ck up place,
What a poem of stupid sh#t,
Suicide is the last thing on my mind,
I will maybe die on the side of the street walking with my guitar,
Nobody cares about a dying soul looking for a dream to be something more,
So this is my last poem and good-bye for all souls who never knew me,
A death of a dream,
A dying soul with nothing more.
This is my last poem. |
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I will check for comments but die from writing anymore poems.My dreams are dying and my soul feels weak and their nothing more I can do but fall in this depression. [ View EvilTiger's Profile ] [ Go to the Poetry Portal ] This Poem has been viewed 372 times
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» Comments / Feedback | by Trapezium (12-30-2004 - 11:53 AM)
goodbye to every soul that doesn't know you, what are you going to do with the people that do know you? |
by EvilTiger (12-30-2004 - 12:00 PM)
disappear from all meaning death. |
by Psychoace (12-30-2004 - 12:07 PM)
it is better to be than to seem to be... |
by EvilTiger (12-30-2004 - 12:13 PM)
That true,I never thought about it that way. |
by devilchild01 (12-30-2004 - 01:18 PM)
by Britney14 (12-30-2004 - 04:35 PM)
You poes an interesting point i shall ponder it adn i love you poem. |
by quiet_place (12-30-2004 - 09:24 PM)
hey.....me n my friend are makin a band.....we need a guitarist....so if ur interested then get back to me....u can email me at slipped_into_acoma@yahoo.com |
by EvilTiger (12-31-2004 - 07:53 AM)
[devilchild01]*I'm not perFect but I fix it.[quiet_place]*I'm thinking about joining but don't know where or what city you live in. |
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