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losing everything (plz read)
written by trulybroken5711:37 AM 1/4/05screw this,
why is life not
worth all this pain anymore?
i don't know any answers,
and i never will.
i don't care anymore,
nothing matters,
i'm trying to save you,
keep you here awhile,
but i don't know if its working.
i to feel so helpless,
but what else is left
for me to do?
i've cried,
yet no one's heard me,
i can't take this anymore
i need a reason,
you are my reason,
yet you are dying inside.
i need you to stay,
stay here
awhile more.
because i
don't know if
i could make it,
if you weren't here,
to help me
through everyday.
i may sound lost
and i may sound scared,
and i am.
scared of losing everything,
all to this horrible pain.
but i have no answers
and i never will |
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i hate feeling this way, yet what can i do...*sigh*...............plz leave commentz [ View trulybroken57's Profile ] [ Go to the Poetry Portal ] This Poem has been viewed 406 times
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» Comments / Feedback | by (anonymous) (1-4-2005 - 12:13 PM)
ur poem is like woah.
its really good and it sems to express how u r feeling.
u can get thru the pain, and i know that sounds sappy, but things will get better with time.
*take a hug form a total stranger* :p |
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