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» Poem: flawless
flawless
written by bloodlyvalentine
08:29 PM 1/4/05
do you always look so beautiful?
you never falter
never fall...
your always perfect
your skin so pale
a shadow playing on your face
the candlelight making you....
unnatural.
you always shine..
as bright as the moon
the light in my cave
i cannot touch
you always stand
so straight and bold
the greatest hero of time
cowers behind you
why do you seem so flawless?
hiding your imperection
beneath your black veil
always calling me towards you...
yet i can never touch you...
feel you..
hold you...
your always so far away
in another world
why cant u come back to me?
come back to what is real


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fuking bullshiiiiiiiit

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» Comments / Feedback
by Schizophrenic_broken (1-4-2005 - 08:33 PM)
thats nice. ummm a dream about joe? its good

by bloodlyvalentine (1-4-2005 - 08:34 PM)
lol, not joe untill he changes his hair back, it looks like shit now! and its annoying!

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