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I bleed for you
written by The grey raven10:11 PM 1/6/05Once the knife has pierced my wrist
Then I shall cease to exist
Hurt and betrayal flows from me
An early grave is soon to be
Crimson life drips onto the floor
And soon I will love you nevermore
Now the knife has pierced my wrist
My life shall end on a night like this |
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| » Comments / Feedback | by (anonymous) (1-6-2005 - 10:17 PM)
| Wow...really touched me...i understand what ur feeling...Great Poem. |
by _Anything_to_be_Loved_ (1-6-2005 - 10:22 PM)
| that was fucking beautiful.... |
by summer_redwind (1-6-2005 - 10:24 PM)
| DANG!!!!!!!! that shit is whak but kool at the same time |
by resurected (1-6-2005 - 10:24 PM)
| i know how you feel...seriously awesome peom try readin sum a mine may know wat im goin through it'd be cool to chat to u maybe |
by chell_ali (1-6-2005 - 10:43 PM)
| omg omg omg.......i (L) that poem so much .... i can really relate 2 it and i enjoyed it...keep on making them and i will read them
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by .::forbidden::. (1-21-2005 - 05:39 PM)
| hello my little kinky twisted mother :P its an emmence poem love the "that" |
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