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» Poem: Raping The Vestal With A Cross
Raping The Vestal With A Cross
written by maledeth
07:17 AM 1/7/05
Mary!
Lo, the blowing winds help keep your screams unexposed!
Very,
fucking vile is this act of violation!
Mary!
Will you reach orgiastic paradise with this onslaught I will boast?!
Very,
special must I be to be deflowering with sensation!

On the giving floor, I rip her robe.
Off it comes in handful moans,
Her hair is so pure, her touch is freezing warm.
I mean you most of harm, to serve my sick and deluded labido!

Bleed my back again with rusty nails.
What never came is what had failed.
Close your eyes and feel what's mine deep in you.
As our bodies soaked in thickened red, I abuse.

Where is his return, my lifeless Mary?
Your virgin cunt bred him now he has to be,
A saviour in our eyes, does he not, my bitter Mary?
Doesn't matter now, you stand deceased...

And diseased!
I stand raping the vestal Mary with the cross!
The symbol Nazareth had for a period of loss.
Well, I stab her holy, and what do you do?!
Christ is coward, nothing new.


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Author's footnotes and comments on this Poem:
The raping of that bloody Virgin....Don't believe she really was a vestal whore in the first place.

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» Comments / Feedback
by D (1-7-2005 - 08:24 AM)
i can see you liking bands like cradle of filth, or the black dahlia murder, which are great bands, but the words they would use would be more suttle i guess i'd say. not bad for a black metal song, i just never make songs to bash on religion it's just a waste of my time because it doesn't matter to me

by maledeth (1-7-2005 - 08:27 AM)
Not a black metal song buddy....I'd say more along the lines of a snuff film enticed with a bit of death metal....and some caligo in it.....well, you might not ponder around on religion....no need to tell me that...that's opinion, bro..so, keep that to yourself! Thanks.

by (anonymous) (1-7-2005 - 08:27 AM)
that is...really deep...really..wow, i haven't read something that left me in awe in a while. you're a good writer.

by (anonymous) (1-7-2005 - 08:29 AM)
adding to my comment before, you don't have to agree with a piece of writing to like it..

by Genocide Reaper (1-7-2005 - 12:04 PM)
I fucking want this shit posted all over the churches walls with a picture of the happenings in the background!

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