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» Poem: Dont let go...(comment)
Dont let go...(comment)
written by Cut_Wrist_Risk
11:52 PM 1/24/05
Dillon don't let go, you've been hanging on so long.
I know you don't realize it but I have been here for you all along.
Praying you'll get better, making sure you will.
Not too much I can do till im with you and time stands still.
I know you feel without her you could die.
I feel that way too, and everyday I cry.
It hurts being away from the person that you love.
But with her or not you can't give up.
Cause everything seems to be the biggest catastrophy.
But I want you to be with her, cause I want you to be happy.


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Dillon...HANG ON

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by XsouredXfaithX (2-11-2005 - 11:55 PM)
i may not know oyu dillon but it seems like you should hold on...or else your going to hurt some people

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