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Suicidal Death
written by DarkAngelBlood01:30 AM 7/5/04Suicide: part one where I got the gun
I got the heavy metal object in my hands. I purchased it from a dead-beat fat man. I told him nobody understands. He told me I was wrong and a stupid kid. He never knew what those bastards did. So I walked home concealing my secret. So now I sit and think what have I done?
Suicide: part two of feeling blu
I think I'm ready to commit a crime, one that is the bloodshed of only mine. It soaks thru my shirt as I fall to the dirt. I grasp for anything to hold onto to, but who do I have?
Suicide: part three of my misery
Blantanly I describe how I feel, but no one believes I am for real. What facts do they need when they're staring blank-faced towards me? I told them all, but who will listen?
Suicide: part four when I shut the door
I go all alone, in my gloomy room--No one to talk to because no one's home. I am forever doomed. Only to the worst fate, everyone's hate. Why be it this way, why never another day?
Suicide: part five is when I die
To make all of these small proportions come together, I first had to deliver a letter. Only to a true friend, but alas this is the end. What will I work with here? Only the unnecessary fear. I have no strenghts that guide me, I am the lonely. I will disappear from this world tonight. Without regret.
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| » Comments / Feedback | by (anonymous) (7-5-2004 - 03:44 AM)
by (anonymous) (9-8-2004 - 04:01 AM)
| This is a REALLY good poem. It really touched me, because i've been through those feelings myself, so many times. It's fuckin awesome! Good work |
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