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Torn Apart
written by Xx_mistik_xX
12:35 AM 1/28/05
I cant take this anymore, im torn between the both of u.

I get this feeling like I love one more, but my body refuses to tell me.

I wanted to see you so bad, and I wanted to be with the other.

To be with one, and know you shouldn’t, to love one, but not know who.

It eats me up inside, to not know who I can really trust.

And it hurts me to tell the both of you, that I cant be with either.

I know that loving one of you, will hurt one even more.

So its best to tell you now, that this is over.

I’ll miss you, dear god I’ll cry.

For the both of you, because of what I did.

I’m so confused, I shant decide.

Because maybe the one I choose, is the wrong one.

So torn apart I’ll remain, and for today I say goodbye.


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» Comments / Feedback
by deadbatteries (1-28-2005 - 12:40 AM)
This one was pretty damn good! Tell me one thing... how do you do it? one perfect poem after another.... it baffles me.... Great job L!

by WHOOPSiLOSTmySOUL (1-28-2005 - 12:51 AM)
i can so relate to that!

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