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My Angel (very impt. PLEASE COMMENT)
written by cryptic_misery10:14 AM 1/30/05Like a fallen snow flake
Your breath, I slowly take it in
So soft... calm...
Will you be mine?
I wish to touch your hand...
And understand everything you feel
As I stare into your eyes
I see your soul
It whispers to me softly...
Suddenly I scream
Bellowing out every breath in my lungs...
A storm of rage takes over me
Wanting to let out everything I feel
Everything inside, kept sacred for you
Then... a rush of silence...
Slowly runs through every vein
Time stops everything but our heart beats
Your voice singing on to me
My eyes kept on your presence
Following every foot print you trail
Silencing your pain...
I softly kiss you in the rain
Holding onto everything
By just touching you...
Do not cry my love
Just dance with me...
Breathe in my air,
Breathe in me.
Your magic...
Taking all heartache away
And then
My breath fails...
And in the moment you catch me
Bringing me up to the horizon
Of light... and fire...
A blaze of sunshine crosses the field
As we float across the purple skies
Then just as I feel taint and weary..
From this long journey,
A quest to find your heart..
And return it to my side...
I start to fall
Slowly into the oblivion
Your hand reaches out to me
I grab a hold tightly
As If I were fading...
Then you make everything clear
I become strong
And hold onto you once again
Embracing all that is mine.
Here comes that white light
The glow of your eyes,
The bright stream of destiny
You're my angel, my love
My angel
My forever shining star,
Of a blue crescent light
Watching over me each night
My angel
On my window... |
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This is for my dearly beloved Tony.... it is everything inside of me for him...
Thank you everyone for making this my top viewed poem! thanks for the wonderful comments!
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» Comments / Feedback | by boom_boom13 (1-30-2005 - 10:18 AM)
it's breathtaking. lol, good job! |
by WhisperInMyEar (1-30-2005 - 10:56 AM)
major props... i loved it |
by (guest) (1-30-2005 - 01:37 PM)
Me Morbid Fucker would like to say, well done that was totally awesome u rock, it was very touching, i almost felt emotion |
by tWiZtIdWiNgZ (1-30-2005 - 04:23 PM)
This was pretty good, I liked it alot. You must feel pretty strong for the guy, huh? |
by AthiestAnarchist (1-30-2005 - 05:58 PM)
That is amazing...wonderful job
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by DarkHuntress (1-31-2005 - 03:06 AM)
wow no wonder its the top 25!!!! |
by Suicidal_Amber (1-31-2005 - 12:56 PM)
Amazing, I dont even know how to put how im feeling due to your poem in words. So much good feedback from me and others should explain it though. Great job! - Amber - |
by wiccan_princess (2-1-2005 - 06:03 PM)
this rocks I can relate to it a lot :-) |
by suicidalgothgirl (2-1-2005 - 07:06 PM)
thats great! write more with angel topics your really good at :) |
by (guest) (2-2-2005 - 04:01 PM)
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