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Compass
written by Cut_Wrist_Risk06:10 AM 1/31/05I wish I knew my plan, this so called god has for me.
So I could understand what I am to be.
Cause I seem worthless, without a point and no affection.
Lost and alone, running in every direction.
I need someone to point out where im suppost to go.
But only time can tell, and only I will know. |
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» Comments / Feedback | by boom_boom13 (1-31-2005 - 06:12 AM)
it has sumthin about it. i like it. keep up the good work! |
by zver (1-31-2005 - 06:14 AM)
omg guees u decide to take it ur way ( i left u second coment on ur poem) well ok i guess my words are useless to u maybe u wiill realise that what ur doing is just being a failure |
by slipped42 (1-31-2005 - 06:25 AM)
I like it .
good flow, great substance |
by Whitney (1-31-2005 - 07:32 AM)
by flesh_eater (1-31-2005 - 10:22 AM)
theres sumthing there what i like but cant put my finger on it. nice flow and i really like ur name to! |
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