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Thoughts Of Darkness
written by Xx_mistik_xX
05:35 PM 1/31/05
Alone and scared, not knowing when to stop, she runs away from the future, and the past comes back to haunt her.
The thoughts she knew, now fade away, with her hopes and dreams she once knew so well, someone stripped her of them all.
Darkness creeps up behind her like a shadow, and wraps around her, her breath is taken away, she suffocates in her own fear.
The screams in the night, the scratches on her wrists, they come back to her in the darkness, she wonders if it will ever stop.
She dreams of freedom, hope and peace, in her troubled mind, the pain of memories sting her heart, and she wishes she could die.
She thinks about all her troubles, and realizes who is to blame, it is her mind that gives her the darkest of places, and from that she was lead astray.
She takes a stand agianst herself, and learns to live a different way, the sun shines freely and keeps her alive, and the thoughts of darkness, are no more than a memory, and slowly, they fade away.


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Author's footnotes and comments on this Poem:
I wrote this a long time ago, tell me what you think, i kno part of the ending is a little off. but ne ways....

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by deadbatteries (2-1-2005 - 04:37 PM)
dark.... very dark.... much like my mind... i loved it! How can you compliment me? your like a million times better then me.... teach me master....

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