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» Poem: make me feel something.....
make me feel something.....
written by Psychoace
03:01 AM 2/1/05
Let me feel the wounded scars upon your breast...

allow me to taste your blood upon my quivering lip,

lay next to me in my dispair as I hate this fucking life...

Depend on me, Love me again...

Make me feel pain,

Let me feel anything again...

It hurts I know but I don't feel it,

These emotions are there but won't come out...

and so they stay stored away,

possibly waiting to one day be released in some way...

Love,

Hate,

Fear,

anything just make me feel something...

Let me feel anything,

take my numbness and pain away...

Just let me FUCKING feel something PLEASE MY LOVE ANYTHING................


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» Comments / Feedback
by JuggaletteTori (2-1-2005 - 03:33 AM)
i fuking love this poem u sound just like me if thats how u feel cuz i feel that way if u read this u2u me if u wont please right more poems.....

by jaggalosb*tch (2-1-2005 - 04:10 AM)
wow i like it...it explains everything i want to say but cant!

by Foiazzy (2-1-2005 - 12:45 PM)
Very good.

by _Anything_to_be_Loved_ (2-2-2005 - 10:24 PM)
it gose together well... and its kinda sad... do you really feel like that...

by mistress (2-10-2005 - 03:28 AM)
i love it! i feel the exact same way...

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