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R.I.P Dillon I love you
written by Cut_Wrist_Risk06:41 AM 2/1/05I hope your pain is over.
But with every breath im closer.
Closer to joining you in the pits of hell.
Kill my self or not I'll get sent threre I can tell.
I tried so hard to save you, but I could of tried harder.
I went so far to help you, but I could of gone farther.
I spoke so many things, but more could have been said.
You wished so many things but number one to be dead.
I wish it could of been me instead of you.
But that is a wish that will sadly never come true.
I remember the last thing you said: "The last thing I'll say is goodbye."
But I kept on typing intill I began to cry.
It was all over and you were all gone.
You always said you'd do it, but I waited to long.
Wiped my tears the best I could but they'd never go away.
For the first time I was speechless ,what could I say?
The person I love is gone, and the last person he talked to was me.
No matter how hard I fight it, I could have done something!
He'll never be forgotten, I cared for him so dearly.
I love you Dillon.
R.I.P. |
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I wish he'd come back
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| » Comments / Feedback | by YoUrDeSiRe (2-1-2005 - 06:44 AM)
| That is very very good, and im sorry you had to expierence that, I dont kno dillion but i will pray for him R.I.P Dillion |
by jaggalosb*tch (2-1-2005 - 06:48 AM)
by physcocmanson (2-2-2005 - 12:03 AM)
| ur poems have touched me today....
i dont know the whole story about u and Dillon, but i can see it's very hard for you
even tho ur poems mad me sad... i thank u for also bringing back some memories of my friend who died that ive been trying not to remember but im glad i did
thank you
and all ur poems are awsome:) |
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