» Poem: The Knife |
The Knife
written by SuperBob01:53 AM 7/12/04The beautiful silver gleam
The sharpness of the edges
The deepness of the wounds it would inflict
The sexual shine
The phalic shape
The increasing desire
I want that blade
In my flesh
I want that blade to cut me always
I want that knife to be mine forever |
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alright so i have a knife thing....and i cant really express it in a poem that well...okie so my poem is shit..but damnit i want a knife [ View SuperBob's Profile ] [ Go to the Poetry Portal ] This Poem has been viewed 372 times
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» Comments / Feedback | by A Modus Operandi (7-12-2004 - 02:38 AM)
I liked all of it up till the last part...That just creeped me out. (Go to a knife store.) |
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