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» Poem: The Knife
The Knife
written by SuperBob
01:53 AM 7/12/04
The beautiful silver gleam
The sharpness of the edges
The deepness of the wounds it would inflict

The sexual shine
The phalic shape
The increasing desire

I want that blade
In my flesh
I want that blade to cut me always
I want that knife to be mine forever


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Author's footnotes and comments on this Poem:
alright so i have a knife thing....and i cant really express it in a poem that well...okie so my poem is shit..but damnit i want a knife

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» Comments / Feedback
by A Modus Operandi (7-12-2004 - 02:38 AM)
I liked all of it up till the last part...That just creeped me out. (Go to a knife store.)

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