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Climbing(COMMENT)
written by Cut_Wrist_Risk08:54 PM 2/14/05Climbing higher up the mountain,
not letting go I keep on hangin.
I think of you standing there at the top,
more and more thoughts tell me I cant stop.
This isn't even close to how far I'd go for you,
I hope you know that im honestly telling the truth.
The feeling I get when im around you I cant describe,
just smiling at me will light up my life.
So I keep on climbing knowing your there,
knowing this is dangerous but I just dont care.
Not dangerous for my health, but dangerous for my emotion,
I am willing to give all my love and devotion.
I know you're mad at me and forgive me I have sinned.
But please give me one more chance I'll never do that agian.
I get to the top, and say "I love you so much Cody"
Next thing I know im at the bottom climbing. |
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This poem is a poem surrounded by a story sorta. When ur in love, you'll go through ANY obstacles...and it feels like ur climbing a mountain. Then u do all that for the person and they dont care...so u do it all over agian. cody :( [ View Cut_Wrist_Risk's Profile ] [ Go to the Poetry Portal ] This Poem has been viewed 330 times
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