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Lonely Voices.
written by Josh_x09:55 AM 2/19/05My one true friend is the voice in my head
The only friend that doesn't leave me
I can trust only this voice
Although all this voice does is make me cry
And wish to die
My mind is laughing at me
Its getting almost too fucking loud
But you know what they say
"Skitzophrenia beats loneliness"
But maybe they were wrong
I still feel so alone
Even in a crowd of my friends
I can still feel that loneliness
I have no idea why
Nor do i really care
So i'll just die slowly
With the laughter in my head
Wishing i was dead. |
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Self Explainatory?
~Josh.
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| » Comments / Feedback | by LaDiablo (2-19-2005 - 10:43 AM)
| Hmm, not bad. I like the reference to schizophrenia (I love psychological disorders!). Not so cliched as a lot of things here tend to be, and many thanks for being literate, as apparently many people here are not (somebody's going to attack me for that statement). Nice form, good rhythm, I like this a lot =). |
by utmosthater (2-19-2005 - 02:34 PM)
| I still feel so alone
Even in a crowd of my friends
I can still feel that loneliness
wow. read my poem called Surrounded. its got exactly the same meaning in it. |
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