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» Poem: Torture Dream (plz comment)
Torture Dream (plz comment)
written by xxxvampire_loverxxx
05:43 PM 2/20/05
Knife:
Carve out their eyes and slit their throat. Not enough to kill, but torture beautifully.

Razorblade:
Push it from the nail to the knuckles, skinning the person's fingers.

Salt and Rubbing Alcohol:
Place their hands in salt, then in rubbing alcohol.

Blow Torch:
Burn the arms and pour lemon juice on their arms.

Nail Polish Remover:
Open a full bottle of nail polish remover, pour it on the person's arms.

Sewing Class:
Saw through their tongue with a small knife. Then sew the wound shut.

Writing Time:
Make them write their suicide note. Tell them you'll repeat the process if they fail to listen.


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Author's footnotes and comments on this Poem:
I know it's disturbing but it could be a lot worse. I'll try to make it creepier.

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» Comments / Feedback
by shredded_kitty (2-20-2005 - 05:45 PM)
lol it's cool, the nail polish one needs explaining a bit more though xkittyx i'm sure ill be a fan in no time ;)

by ForeverUnseen (2-20-2005 - 05:46 PM)
haha that's descriptive makes me tingle with happyness imagining it. Awesome ^_^

by Hellbender_Kiss (2-20-2005 - 05:47 PM)
wow, i like the lemon juice one!

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