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» Poem: Your hell
Your hell
written by GeishaGirl
12:02 PM 2/21/05
I wander up the path of your hell, lit up with my own fire. How can I deceive this in such a way you will understand? But really I can't describe the hell you put me through over and over again. I was naive enough to believe that you will be here for me, instead I had to rely on some one close to you biologically, only more enhanced, only that I know that you know you hate to hear me see say he was more "enhanced," Oh and how I love it.

Oh how I love it
Yes I do, I love it
No I can't describe

Take a clue, it helps when I write this down with the pad and pen, it helps me when I symbolically draw the pain, only I know the meaning no one else. Oh and how I love it. But I didn't love you when you dragged me through the pain, your mental beatings proved hurtful. As I grew I knew you weren't an angel anymore, but a mere demon blinding me by his enchanting charms.

Your charms are gone
I no longer see the angel
I see a mere demon

I wander out of your hell for good, blowing out the flames, I hope you can see the same as I, we can no longer exist with each other, just one last request I beg of you to see beyond my existence. I don’t want to feel your pain; pain is the last thing I want to feel right now, I’ve dealt with mine. I don’t want to deal with yours just keep away, just leave don’t come back.


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by jmills007 (2-21-2005 - 03:55 PM)
i love this please, more?

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