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"My Death, Your Funereal"
written by maledeth08:02 AM 2/24/05The last spark of black left a majesty.
Crows and ravens chant at hand.
Whilst Crescent Constellations flew.
My throne entombed nostalgic lands.
Silhouetted dust. First rising dusk. A tear was bled for me.
When it was me that gods released.
It's you I see suffering from dire breach!
The kneed one had lost in vain! A cruel eternal inherited and I lay same.
With her head down. A sober frown mystifies her from this merciless place.
I saw it never coming. Infinite is pain when grasped, a flame. In death's embrace a bane swindled me tame.
I saw her forgiving, I saw her repent, I envisioned her coming the day that she died!
I am ghost as wind emits my darkness.
A livid spirit in the touch of no will.
Oblivion claimed as Silver moons grew.
And a bastard insight resented the kill.
I saw her stab onwards with knives in recluse.
Sacrificing for me, but I knew the due that she payed.
Bastard father took mine away once again.
How she relents, and I am witness to suffer damnation!
How she loves me so....
Windowsill cohorts and slipknot nightmares.
A dream for every price taken. One more look for every stare!
I wished her not to be, Dead. As free as gods have given me.
Love sank me deep, and now I wanted to save, but thrones left deprivation.
A weary glare puncuated the scare. I saw her tempting, with such mesmerization.
And I the crowd, to watch the tragedy decline...
I suffered the life innocence had made.
Caressed with love, now down above. Not ever seeing her want again.
The bastard father and his son snickered, another soul withered.
And I saw death tearing, another veil for her face.
When will I receive demise, When I am far from nothingness?!
I lay to rest my soul, and comes out the tone of misery to plague me forevermore!!!! |
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Author's footnotes and comments on this Poem:
Well, as you can see, a fucking brand new work from a mental case. Comment, lament, emit yourself unto this and inhale.
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| » Comments / Feedback | by Genocide Reaper (2-24-2005 - 08:09 AM)
| Absorbs the anonymity. *applauds* |
by chiqlette555 (2-24-2005 - 08:10 AM)
| I love the line "a tear was bled for me." it evokes a very strong image. the punctuation splits the lines up a bit unusually, but it gives the poem interesting rythyhm when read aloud. nice work, keep writing. |
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