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my suicide letter
written by lost_cause11:26 PM 2/24/05Why should I waste my time trying to live?
I've lost so much and I have nothing to give.
Why is everything falling apart?
I'm trying so hard to heal my broken heart.
Why does everyone seem to leave?
They make it so hard for me to breathe.
Why do people hurt those they love?
When they should put our feelings above.
Why can't I seem to keep it together?
Somehow my life is filled with rainy weather.
Why don't I know how to make things better?
This is what I would write in my suicide letter... |
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| » Comments / Feedback | by gothic_angel_44 (2-24-2005 - 11:45 PM)
| wow this was the best suicide poem i have ever read u should totally write more as long as none of it ever comes true |
by A7Xgurl (2-24-2005 - 11:51 PM)
| that is really good. i can totally relate to you in this. i have written so many of these in my life. could you do me a favor... could you read mine and tell me what you think? it is called Satan. thanx |
by EternalConceal (2-25-2005 - 12:00 AM)
| great. Suicides not worth it, take it form me |
by InsanityMirror (2-25-2005 - 12:32 AM)
| Awesome. I enjoyed reading it. Keep up the good work. :) |
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