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Anything
written by piperneedshelp03:27 AM 2/26/05something happen, anything
just so that i dont have to deal with this
i dont care what it is
as long as i dont have to worry
about what happens tomorrow
about what happens to anyone
i dont want to have to care
if its all going to end some day,
why cant it end now?
please, someone, anyone
make something happen
so that tomorrow doesnt come for me |
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| » Comments / Feedback | by Xxmyself-painxX (2-26-2005 - 03:28 AM)
| do you hate life? why did you write this?
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by piperneedshelp (2-26-2005 - 03:29 AM)
| its not that i hate life, its that something happened to me a bit ago, last week. and i just dont want to have to deal with it on monday |
by blackened_rose (2-26-2005 - 05:03 AM)
| I really like it! You did a good job expressing how you feel, and it flows together very well. Keep up the good work, it's really good!=)~Kath |
by piperneedshelp (2-26-2005 - 06:48 AM)
| thanks! i enjoy hearing comments like that, not just that "oh yea ur stuff rocks!" but actual structured comments that tell me WHY its good/bad. thanks a ton! |
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