» Poem: Crimson Regret. |
Crimson Regret.
written by Josh_x12:11 PM 2/26/05Wipe the blood from my hands
So crimson
So perfect
So pure
Will you still hold me
If you saw what i have done
Would our kisses remain the same
If you could taste that victims blood
Just hold me
Tell me its gonna be okay
Tell me we're gonna be just fine
I know i'm a sinner
But atleast i can admit it
Washing the blood from my skin
I still don't feel clean
Closing my eyes
I can feel my life slipping away
Crashing and burning before my eyes
Turn up the shower tap
So my crys remain unheard
Pretend everythings alright
Pretend i'm just fine. |
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Uh.. Its kinda sucky. Sorry. [ View Josh_x's Profile ] [ Go to the Poetry Portal ] This Poem has been viewed 345 times
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» Comments / Feedback | by Invisible (2-26-2005 - 01:55 PM)
Not sure what you find so sucky about it, I think is is very good. But then what do I know. LOL |
by sweetiepie89 (2-26-2005 - 03:35 PM)
that wasnt sucky at all....you did a good job of it....i enjoyed it very very much |
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