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» Poem: insane
insane
written by avenged_souls2700
11:26 PM 2/26/05
depression in the morning
hang over in the night
insanity in the evening makes nightmares such a fright , im living inside a dreamworld of things that are true, theres a thought for me a thought for you when all are dreams come true, but depression rises over me it takes my life and souls away just 2 burry you


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comment this please im not that good at poetry

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by kat_the_twat (2-27-2005 - 01:12 AM)
really good :D

by Sonny (2-27-2005 - 04:57 AM)
Awesome job, you describe your torment in a way easy to understand and not to complicated.

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