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tending my grave (plz comment)
written by darkness_follows_me08:59 PM 3/1/05Into the deep so far down way off in the black
Gone past the point of no turning back
This fatal attraction is pulling me closer, holding me fast
Wrist of slices, will i be able to lose your grasp
Above the sky i see your soul fly
Upon the face of an tongue-tied misfit
Falling faster, cuts run deeper
Blood dries slower, and pain slices cleaner
Somehow sometime
It wont be this way
Shadows hide where light should be
Out of darkness, out of mind
Lost in too far, falling deeper
And the light in my tunnel is closing on your eyes
I've escaped from the heavens off in the skies
For one reason of seeing your black eyes
Off in the distance something tends to unveil
Off in the dark something moves unknown
Somewhere behind you theres another one there
But you were only somewhat of a fantasy
My eyes are all bloody, and I cant see
As the lord leaves me tending my grave |
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| » Comments / Feedback | by Deathcrush (3-1-2005 - 10:25 PM)
| obviously you have many problems to deal with
iits good your adressing them
but it dosnt really help unless someone cares??
well i hope leaving this has at least made you feal somewhat better |
by (guest) (3-1-2005 - 10:57 PM)
| i think it was a good poem yet i live in the dark i think its kool but some ppl wont |
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