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» Poem: I hate that you can see into me
I hate that you can see into me
written by DarkAngelBlood
01:51 AM 7/19/04
When you look into my eyes,
You see into my soul.
When I look into your eyes,
I see they're still cold.
How can someone who hurt me so bad,
See down deep and still make me sad?
You've got me on edge,
Ready to tear,
I hate the way you make me feel,
But there is no fear.
Everytime you're around,
My heart races and pounds.
I get the butterflies in my stomach,
They make me weak.
I fall for you still,
I always get beat.
It's like in that song,
The girl is crying over the boy.
It's so damn wrong,
He made her his toy.
And I wonder how long,
This will go on.
I can't take what you don't even know,
And I can't mistake what I don't show.
My guts on the floor for you,
I'll pour them in a cup.
Drink them like you want to,
The acid in your stomach will eat them up.
Here taste my feelings too,
They taste disgusting.
They're sour like your attitude,
I hope the pit of your stomach starts rusting.
All that carbon dioxide with no way to breathe,
The air will all be rushing,
So you die slowly.
Torturous and painful,
I really don't want that,
But you're so disdainful,
That I don't want you back.
I don't want you to see into me,
I hate that you can.
From your gaze I want to be free,
This is all I can stand.


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by souls of the forggoten (7-19-2004 - 02:55 AM)
this is good.

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