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» Poem: My thought of today(plz comment)
My thought of today(plz comment)
written by darkness_follows_me
05:27 PM 3/2/05
I want no pity...
I want no emotions...
I want no tears...
I want no hugs of I'll be there...
I want no I'm here for you...
I want no things will get better...
I want no I will help you...
I want no smiles...

No.. I need what is said to me to be truly felt.

Stop!
Making fun of me...
Stop!
Harassing me...
Stop!
Raping me from whatever pride I have left...
Stop!
torturing me telling me you love me...
Stop!
Hiding from me, I want the truth...
Stop!
Tapping into a soul who's body is wounded and is tired of dragging it behind...
Stop!
Playing with my heart...

When will the world truly understand that the girl in me has been hurt enough with her own emotions, and doesn't need more cuts...

When you done I won't be here, then what will you do?

Who...
will you hurt?
Who...
will you stab?
Who
will you make fun of?
Who...
will make you feel better about you?
Who...
will be there liking you even though you don't see it...
Who...
will love you though you might love another?

I only know one thing and that's it won't be me. I will vanish in thin air somewhere unknown, not even to me... I won't even know who you all are... I won't even know who I am to me..."


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Author's footnotes and comments on this Poem:
its not the best....plz comment anyway:)

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» Comments / Feedback
by black_heart_emo_girl (3-2-2005 - 05:31 PM)
that was soo truly amazing. i luv it

by blackie-hawk (3-2-2005 - 05:31 PM)
I really LOVE this poem! I can relate to it. Really relate. Beautiful written. Keep on the good work. :)

by crazybitch (3-2-2005 - 05:49 PM)
keep it up. this 1 rocks

by weeping_violet (3-2-2005 - 05:53 PM)
bravo bravo spiffing lol no thats an emotional poem and its a good one at that im proud your my friend lol

by Deathcrush (3-2-2005 - 11:11 PM)
i know the EXACT fealing what lies spit out there mouths yet we submit anyway...

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