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» Poem: layers of myself(plz comment)!!!!!!!!!!!
layers of myself(plz comment)!!!!!!!!!!!
written by darkness_follows_me
08:35 PM 3/2/05
Let me out
Set me free

I need to be set free

I'm burning up inside from crying about nothing.

Let me out Let me out Let me out Let me out Let me out.

Let me fly

Let my wings expand

Let my feathers fly away into the sunset

Let me free out of this cage, it is too small.

Take me away

Take me away from this place

Take me away from him

Take me home with you I need out of this place

It is to complicated and scary.

Leave me alone

Just let me free for a day or two

I need time to figure out who are my friends and who aren't.

Just let me out, set me free, let me fly

I'm a bird that needs to migrate south, so let me free let me go I'll be back at summer.

I promise I will be back in time for hot summer days to go jump the ice cold pool.

I'm a polar bear just let me sleep my anger off during the winter.

I promise I will be back for those hot ball games with sunflower seeds.
I promise I will love you for ever, just give me some time, give me some space to think.


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by Deathcrush (3-2-2005 - 10:24 PM)
oh how cruel the flesh can be! let your mind wonder to wherever it may desire there you should find tranquillity and peace of mind

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