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Before you love me
written by XpaperdollX05:07 AM 3/3/05Before you love me, Forever more,
Remember who I am, And who I was before.
Before you love me and might say it so,
Remember I am not perfect , and not all I know.
Before you love me , and make a mistake,
I might smile but inside I ach.
Before you love me, and give to me your all,
Remember I stand firm even when I fall,
Before you love me and attempt a kiss,
Remember when you leave, you’ll leave me that to miss.
Before you love me and have sparkles in your eyes,
Remember I have sins, and giant scary lies.
Before you love me or so you make believe,
Remember I am young, But I am not naïve.
Before you love me, and swear it to above,
Remember my past and all those I have loved.
But if you do love me, and you should say goodbye,
Remember I’ll remember you,
And now and then I’ll cry. |
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» Comments / Feedback | by Tessin (3-3-2005 - 05:10 AM)
Thats the most well rhymed poem ive heard in a while. |
by perfect.flaws (3-3-2005 - 05:23 AM)
wow i love that poem. and the meaning, and i agree with tessin you did a great job and rhyming it together. |
by (guest) (3-3-2005 - 05:41 AM)
Great meaning and just the feeling im in at the mo'.. |
by (guest) (3-8-2005 - 04:11 AM)
just when i think i find a favorite out of all of your poems...you write a better one. i wish i could write like you |
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