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Children of Pain(plz comment)
written by darkness_follows_me08:51 PM 3/4/05God, have u noticed
the hurt in our eyes..
Have you noticed
the constant pleas to die..
What are we doing wrong
for you to punish us with pain..
Please tell me now
because I'm going insane..
No one deserves
to get beaten or raped..
I can't put you in truth
not even to this date..
No one should have to go through
self harm of any kind..
As some look through the shadows
there life they can't find..
Some say with all there hearts
"we need to make our own mistakes"..
But how much should one person go through...
what does it take?!?
God, help your children
don't make us take our last resort..
Don't make us cry
and make our own life short..
You need to open your eyes
and look around..
Then maybe the truth
for once would be found..
No one should have to live life
in total pain...
Because the way you look at things
it's a total shame... |
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| » Comments / Feedback | by Deathcrush (3-4-2005 - 08:57 PM)
| blame god for the suffering
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by Firen (3-4-2005 - 09:03 PM)
| really good poem, one of the reasons im not a 'God' person |
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