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» Poem: Fucking Hypocrite!
Fucking Hypocrite!
written by perfect.flaws
11:59 PM 3/4/05
Some times it feels like you hate me.
Other times as if you'd do ANYthing for me.
So if you talk so high of me.
Then why is it you treat me like SHIT?

You actions only show,
that you hate everything i do, and how i do it.

Not even one bit,
have you told me that i fit
into your perfect fuking world,
your just the king in this 'beautiful' kingdom,
and here i am your worthless slave, and servent.

Everything i do for you,
will never be good enough,
everything is just so tough,
why are your words so rough?

When i do something i think is right,
you just end up starting a fight.
You never recognize anything i ever do.

WHY the FUCK do i put up with you.
you FUKING ASSHOLE, I HOPE you DIE.

Everytime i try and talk to you,
its like your dead indside,
and everytime i've tried
you just fuking hide.
Your so FUCKING cold!
but i know it's only towards me!

Your just an amazing, loving, caring,
understanding guy, with everyone else!
WTF! its just one big show, why can't they see!

Then you go and say
i put up a brick wall,
you fuking idiot!
Only because your wall
is unbreakable steel!

If your trying to care, you need to learn how.
Your just pushing me away.

You wonder why im so defensive?!
Maybe 'cause im used to your accusations!
Used to you blaming everything on me!
Used to you not trusting or believing me!

If someone else does something wrong,
it's okay with you!, you laugh it off, and make a joke. But when it's me your a fuking cold, and heartless bitch!

What the fuck do you want from me?!
you know what i give up!
Why don't you go and fuck off to the bar.
I mean it's more your home then here.
Your fuking 40! you think your 20!
Stop fuking smoking up, and partying everynight!

Why get mad at me when i go party only once a week!? you fuking hypocrite!


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Author's footnotes and comments on this Poem:
This is about my STEPDAD. I used to try and please him, but nothing i did ever made a differnce, because he always found something else i'd done wrong.

Again i know it's long.

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» Comments / Feedback
by shadowkitty444 (3-5-2005 - 12:01 AM)
OMG I LOVE IT!!! but to me it relates by my ex he treated me like shit and always wanted crap from me and i was like his slave of or something but ha i dont put with that anymore!!! U GOT SOME TALENT!

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