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» Poem: "Do You" (please comment)
"Do You" (please comment)
written by XxXstitchesXxX
05:57 AM 3/5/05
Do you even know my name,
how old I am,
what grade im in?
Do you even care,
any love to share?
Are you my dad,
the guy that never could give love,
but could rain hurt?
Why did you disown me,
what did I do?
Do you hate me,
you seem like you do.
I had respect for you,
love for you,
and I used to care for you.
Now I wish for you to die,
I wish for you to cry.
I hated you for what you did,
and then I gave you another chance,
and you treated me like a stranger.
I dont know what you've turned into,
but never agian will I be your daughter,
you even said that you're self.


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» Comments / Feedback
by MelodyRayne (3-5-2005 - 05:58 AM)
Who needs a Dad like that. Good poem.

by JuhyouXKaze15 (3-5-2005 - 06:38 AM)
I like it. But maybe make a paragragh for once....

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