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Feeling something
written by Cut_Wrist_Risk
05:58 AM 3/5/05
Standing in you're room bored as we could be.

You slowly approached me.

Hugging me closely with the hope you wont let go.

I felt something for you but right then I didn't know.

We hugged while standing in your room with your hyper friend about.

Runing all around and screaming out so loud.

But we ignored him completely,

because there was you and me.

But it wasen't intill you walked me home that you kissed me,

and I knew right then I had felt something.


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by XxXstitchesXxX (3-5-2005 - 06:03 AM)
Nice poem...I rele honestly tho liked the kiss one...not to get anyone offended here though

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