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A Razor For A Dollar! (please comment)
written by lost_cause03:30 AM 3/7/05A dollar for a razor! Any buyers?
The latest tool in pain relief!
I swear it makes it go away!
I swear it rids of all the grief!
This isn't false advertising!
If the pain comes back use it again!
Don't worry about God!
He didn't list this as a sin!
A dollar for a razor!
Try and you'll be GREAT!
This is one terrific addiction!
Something you'll use every day!
Side effects may include:
Being hated, Degraded, Always blue,
Compulsions, Convulsions, Attitude,
Disregard, Medical cards, and many more...
Such as voilence and depression,
Alcohol or drug addiction,
An addiction to anything that eases pain,
Using this "Cure" you have nothing to gain,
But let us focus on the pain relief
The reason you'll want one!
One last final side effect...
Use in moderation!
May cause near death experience
Or even death itself
This razor will bring short-lived relief
But it also causes hell |
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Comments? Please... (Not recommending anyone resort to cutting... Just a poem)
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| » Comments / Feedback | by Troubled_Soul (3-7-2005 - 03:47 AM)
| okay tht was awesome, and i think that that can really help the ppl who cut understand how their friends feel about it. |
by XxBrOkeNSmiLe7xX (3-7-2005 - 06:29 AM)
| that was great, n so true... |
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