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» Poem: Erasing the final part of me
Erasing the final part of me
written by cryptic_misery
06:01 AM 3/7/05
Living life inside this frame
Since you left nothing's been the same
Scaring the pain right out of my blood
Picking myself up when I fall from the cut
Trying to hold myself down as the knife continues to rise
I just want to see the sorrow taken from my eyes
I'm finally going to press delete
Erasing the final part of me
But first I grab your hand for it's the one thing i've kept
And flash back to every night that we have slept
So as I gasp and vanish as I take this last breath
Leaving you with my body, for that's all I have left...


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by (guest) (3-7-2005 - 06:49 AM)
Hey I love your poem

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