» Poem: End my cries |
End my cries
written by Misery08:37 PM 3/7/05end my cries
let me die
let me go
so alone
I can[t be
living in this world I dispise to see |
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» Comments / Feedback | by The Black Halo (3-7-2005 - 09:26 PM)
This is much worse than your older poetry. It sounds like a 7-year-olds attempt. |
by candycanemain (3-7-2005 - 11:28 PM)
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