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Dedicated to the critics
written by Genocide Reaper09:21 AM 3/8/05I can't write how I feel without a critic jumping on my back.
Read it through, sift it well, or you'll get a little taste of Hell.
This is dedicated to you, this is my verbal decimation of you.
Fuck you, why don't you off yourself? Then you could be cool like those kids that commit suicide.
Then you can be cool like the cutters.
Then you can bend over, and let me put my foot up your fucking ass!
Go fuck yourself.
Can you keep up with all the profanity?
I'm sure you've learned to use it a lot as well, in this fucked up society.
Fuck you.
Fuck, you. Mother fucker.
Fuck your criticism.
Fuck your lack of comprehension.
Fuck your laziness.
Fuck you fuckers that judge and never read all the way through.
Do me the favor.
Do all of US the honor.
Pull the trigger.
But remember.
have the barrel point blank at your skull, fucker. |
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» Comments / Feedback | by GeishaGirl (3-8-2005 - 09:26 AM)
omg i will! but wheres da scull? :::emo: |
by Genocide Reaper (3-8-2005 - 09:51 AM)
by Genocide Reaper (3-8-2005 - 09:57 AM)
Do you fit the description? |
by GeishaGirl (3-8-2005 - 09:58 AM)
I don't think no one likes your rant.
OMG. :AwShit: |
by GeishaGirl (3-8-2005 - 09:58 AM)
"Do I fit the description"
It's your choice. |
by Genocide Reaper (3-8-2005 - 10:01 AM)
Nah, I don't think you do.. And if they don't like my rant. I don't care. Long as I got one fan thats enough. |
by GeishaGirl (3-8-2005 - 10:11 AM)
Lol. I think their all balless 14 yr olds on teh poetry porthole tonight, anyway. Oh and no offence if you fit into the 14 Category. |
by Genocide Reaper (3-8-2005 - 10:33 AM)
Yes, I'm a fourteen year old alcoholic that owns guns, girls and guitars....Well I wouldn't say I OWN girls, but those three words just seem to flow... So I think I'll write a poem about the three. |
by sarah10087 (3-8-2005 - 12:36 PM)
accepting you have criticism. Your making progress. The next step is admitting that there is no poetry master and if there were it would certainly not be you. |
by Genocide Reaper (3-9-2005 - 02:07 AM)
Thats your opinion. And, you missed the point of this poem.. Maybe next time you should ask? |
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