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Endless
written by GeishaGirl05:54 AM 3/10/05In the endless dimness of the lane
Only the moon shines brightly
I see the reflection in the murky water
The luminous moon the sparkling stars
Oh what a wondrous sight!
In the endless dimness of the lane
Sickly bodies wander aimlessly
I see their deranged faces
The expressionless expressions
Oh what a wondrous sight!
In the endless night lazing in the lane
An old building stands proudly
I see its flags raised high and still
The dried still paint flaking away
Oh what a wondrous sight! |
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Mmm... irony...
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» Comments / Feedback | by Genocide Reaper (3-10-2005 - 06:44 AM)
You have offically become my favorite Midnight poet, since well on my time frame you come around about Midnight. |
by GeishaGirl (3-10-2005 - 06:47 AM)
Lol. Isn't it time for all GR's to go to bed? Or bed doesn't exsist in your vocab? |
by Genocide Reaper (3-10-2005 - 06:52 AM)
Bed? At night? What crazieness is that?! Its time to get wired! |
by GeishaGirl (3-10-2005 - 06:56 AM)
weird? Wtf? For me it's time to get weirder! *looks at time* just a few more hrs! excellent! |
by Genocide Reaper (3-10-2005 - 07:03 AM)
lol Have fun with that. :) |
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