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» Poem: I thought you'd make everything better
I thought you'd make everything better
written by Cut_Wrist_Risk
04:27 PM 3/10/05
I thought you would make everything better,
I supposed we'd be friends forever.
But how quickly did that thought of mine end,
as did our realationship, where you were supposed to be my friend.
How can you hate someone just as much as you like them?
Claim you're all cool, then you condemmn.
I care for you as a friend and as a lover,
you cant erase me out of your life, bad things can't be covered.
I know I caused you pain and I wish I could take it back,
But I think here and out we should make a pack.
That even though this is hard we should remain friends,
but if you dont want to you dont have to pretend.
I understand it's hard, to be around the person you have feelings for,
I do it all the time...which is why we're not together anymore.


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» Comments / Feedback
by cryptic_misery (3-10-2005 - 04:29 PM)
I love this poem, dear =)

by True_Darkness (3-10-2005 - 06:57 PM)
Once again great poem

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