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Please, I Love You (plz comment)
written by xxxvampire_loverxxx04:57 AM 3/12/05Don't let go
Please, just try
Stay with me, I need you
I hate seeing you cry
Your pain was caused by no other than me
I'll never forgive myself for what I did
I can't look at you the same
I gave you a reason to no longer wish to live
I tore out your heart
I broke your faith
I'll never forget
The tears rolling down your face
You held me so tightly
You wouldn't let go
You tried to fight back the tears
Now I believe you, now I know
You don't have to try to prove it
You don't have to cry
You don't have to explain
Cuz now I know why
I didn't believe it
Now I do
Please don't go
Please, I love you |
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Writer: Shelby L. Allen
Dedication: Tyson R. Mills
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» Comments / Feedback | by BloodDrippingOnTheFloor (3-12-2005 - 05:00 AM)
doesnt it piss you off that no one commented after being viewed 4-5 times? well i think its rather interesting.
good job doll ;) |
by soulless (3-25-2005 - 02:42 AM)
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