» Poem: "Suicide In Sweet Adoration" |
"Suicide In Sweet Adoration"
written by maledeth10:17 AM 3/12/05Self-imposed. Enclosed with fate.
My loss is little, but the end strifes with pain.
Too bad it ends this way....
May god revenge for my blasphemous anathema.
Too fucking dead to pray.
Too fucking wed to persuasion.
Once upon a callous damnation,
I bred suicide...
With scars of woe and derelicition!
Nothing short of but submission.
Firmament stained with incisions.
Shut my eyes with heresy.
Systematically demented, Fell to damsel Insanity.
I, robed in vanity. I, secret in clandestine.
May this be death's monument.
Always done with less succession.
Leave this world with last impression.
Whilst I leave in noose and river? No...not alone.
To take as well my foes like crow with favor.
I steal my enemies....
Stigma scorn of blessed condition!
I obey my last command in mission.
Prey my last soul before perdition.
Close my eyes with mystery.
A sheer demand for last resistance.
Fleshened demonites fall risen.
I reach for last minute's vision.
Seal my eyes as heretic.
"How the light dims a shadow, before my sullen dissident form. Ravens chant omenous echoes. Demise is born. Winter cold limbs lay silent.
The sky is on fire with austere declination. Frozen, my scold. Loss of life, told. Once upon a violent goodbye."
Severed deities I had envisioned!
In my rites, I cursed the christened!
Last dusk for dereliction.
Veil my eyes a reverance.
Stigma scorned of blessed condition.
Nothing short of my submission.
Firmament with empty vision.
Seal my eyes as heretic. |
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» Comments / Feedback | by (guest) (3-12-2005 - 10:33 AM)
i dint get tht much coz the words were confusin, (but thts just me 4 ya) but overall twas GR8!!!! |
by Macabre_Necromancer (3-12-2005 - 10:35 AM)
I think you hit the thesaurus a little too hard. Writing a good poem is one thing, but you don't have to go all Yeats on people. |
by maledeth (3-12-2005 - 10:44 AM)
You haven't seen my other works..have you? That's the thing I don't get about pretentious bastards..they think they know it all!!! You might as well take a look at all my other works before a hint of thought EVEN seethes out of you. |
by maledeth (3-12-2005 - 10:50 AM)
Oh...sorry there necro..I erased the comment you left in accident there....Well, you come in here to make assumptions, not to criticize, am I right?? Big difference, don't you think!? |
by maledeth (3-12-2005 - 10:52 AM)
I'm not asking you to like my poetry, by the ways. I didn't write it for your liking, nor your state of mentality. If you got it, fine, if not, might as well ask 20 questions. |
by Silent_Hate (3-12-2005 - 10:53 AM)
I like this poem, most of the greatest poems that are created you cant understand because the writer has written it with beautiful, long and expressive words. But I can clearly understand the meaning of this poem and if anyone else cant they aren't looking at it hard enough. |
by Genocide Reaper (3-12-2005 - 10:54 AM)
*shakes his head* Such narrow minds on the path of assumptions.. So quick are they to jump to conclusions.. In which are usually ill founded. Ah my Brother. Another great work of art flowing from the soul of a malice endowed mad man! |
by maledeth (3-12-2005 - 11:01 AM)
Geno...silent_hate...thank you both. To Necro, I just ask you to please just judge the fucking work with no assumptions or belief of know-it-all. |
by zver (3-21-2005 - 10:09 AM)
plz shut the fuck up and kill urself thank u |
by maledeth (3-22-2005 - 08:00 AM)
Boris(Zver) is that all you can say? Shouldn't you be the one who should drop cold? |
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