» Poem: Fragments of Memories |
Fragments of Memories
written by dark12506:00 PM 3/13/05Fragments of old memories
Cover my bedroom floor,
Hang in every picture frame, and
Fill up every dresser drawer.
All the things i could have done;
All the things I should have done;
All the things I cannont change;
Oh, the things I would rearrange
If I could change the past!
But a las,
Such power is far from my grasp,and
Only fragments of memories last... |
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» Comments / Feedback | by QuiteSpecial88 (3-13-2005 - 06:01 PM)
Wow...intense poem...love it... |
by trulybroken57 (3-13-2005 - 06:22 PM)
sum rhyming poems get really boring and strained, but this one is really smooth and it just flows....i really like it, keep it up |
by (guest) (3-14-2005 - 12:07 AM)
by Ev0l_sin#TRIP (3-15-2005 - 11:53 PM)
love the poem
keep goin w/ the flow |
by cryptic_misery (3-20-2005 - 03:44 AM)
this isn't a haiku, haiku's have 3 lines, first line 7 syllables, then 5, then 7. |
by cryptic_misery (3-20-2005 - 03:45 AM)
this isn't a haiku, haiku's have 3 lines, first line 7 syllables, then 5, then 7. |
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