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She
written by Choking_Away_Life02:16 AM 3/14/05She stares
at her reflection
hating what she sees
closing her eyes
in disbelief
"disgusting,
this is what i've become"
picking up the razor blade
slowly she cuts
across her wrist
slicing her veins
pressing harder
only pauses the pain
until the next morning
when all she feels is numb
walks back to the mirror
shaking her head in disbelief
"disgusting,
this is what i've become
I can't eat
and i can't sleep
without breathing in all this pain."
she punches her reflection
trying to get rid of what she sees
watches the mirror
shatter
picks up a shard of glass
and once again
she
slits her wrists
only this time
she takes her life |
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| » Comments / Feedback | by lostinsilence (3-14-2005 - 02:18 AM)
| I think its pretty good, I got it, just to tell you it just needs a little more work... but still keep it up! ^_^ |
by (guest) (4-1-2005 - 12:49 AM)
| YEAH I REALLY LIKE THIS 1 BETTER THAN MY "SHE" POEM... I LOVE YOU SWEETY! ~u no who~ |
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