» Poem: Bleary (PLZ PLZ PLZ COMMENT!!!) |
Bleary (PLZ PLZ PLZ COMMENT!!!)
written by cryptic_misery05:00 AM 3/14/05Indistinct...
A hazy outline
Of a nightmare
Compressed and folded
By a clouded and bitter rain drop... of blood
A crepuscular dim of light
Receiving a blurry image in which
Captures every vision of hope
In the aspect of a faint and baffled dreamer,
A brisk shadow watches from a distance
Wanting a more lucid moon
A shimmer of light reveals upon his prison
Reaching down to end
A deprived child's sleepless nights
He awaits his gateway to freedom
And by daybreak, he mourns upon his belief
In a bleary puzzle, called life. |
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A poem, inspired by a dear friend of mine, who went through this as he slept [ View cryptic_misery's Profile ] [ Go to the Poetry Portal ] This Poem has been viewed 389 times
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» Comments / Feedback | by ~Blood_Thirsty_Mayhem~ (3-14-2005 - 05:07 AM)
Wow this poem is awesome. It has emotion and class
I give it a lot of thumbs up!
~L |
by Genocide Reaper (3-14-2005 - 06:09 AM)
by cryptic_misery (3-14-2005 - 06:13 AM)
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