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Shadow Of Mind (PLEASE COMMENT...!!)
written by cryptic_misery08:52 PM 3/14/05An obscure illusion floats about
In my head
Like a darkened and somber daze
Such a lurid and colorless mix
Of a horrid penumbra; this shadow
With no heart.
So hidden,
Trapped in the bleakness of the cold
He isolates himself
In the very own desolation of his soul
Buried in his sorrow
Eaten by his solitude
And he dissipates his way into my mind
Becoming filled by hollow waste
Lacking every sense
Waiting for sunshine to occupy his void
But of course, his world is useless
Full of ineffective air
No clarity nor purity
Just a distorted warp of mutilation
That I deviate from day to day... |
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| » Comments / Feedback | by Dianesjewels (3-14-2005 - 08:54 PM)
| Best poem I've read today. Congratulations. |
by (guest) (3-14-2005 - 09:11 PM)
| Vety nice. Keep up the good work. |
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