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Sentimental Eternity
written by cryptic_misery11:39 PM 3/14/05I find a beautiful flower
Pick it up with tenderness
Place it in your hands
Leaving you with a sentimental smile
And take your heart into my own
Savoring every beat it creates
Cherishing the treasure of your life
Intertwined with mine while
Planting a seed in destiny's path
Of endless time
Watering it with posterity
Knowing our future has no end
And I watch this path grow
Slowly up to the horizon
Of a sunset's dream; you and me
An envision of integrity,
Faith, and coherence
In this everlasting binding
Permanently connected
And joined together by a passionate kiss
To live happily for all eternity |
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| » Comments / Feedback | by Dianesjewels (3-14-2005 - 11:42 PM)
| A very good poem. Good use of language. Nice job. |
by (guest) (3-15-2005 - 04:27 AM)
| oh my god. dianesjewels actually left a positive comment. by the way, i really like this poem. tis beautiful |
by cryptic_misery (3-15-2005 - 06:18 AM)
by _razorblade_kisses_ (3-16-2005 - 02:35 AM)
| guest. that be me. but ill say it again...i love this poem |
by cryptic_misery (3-16-2005 - 02:36 AM)
by cryptic_misery (3-16-2005 - 02:37 AM)
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