» Poem: 12 questions for my love |
12 questions for my love
written by Trapezium02:31 PM 7/24/04Can i sing to you sweetly?
Will you promise you'll meet me?
Will you be there when i need you?
I know that i will be.
Will you die for my love?
Or will you be a runaway dove?
Will you be with me forever?
Please don't give me a shove.
Can we chase the blue sky?
Is it okay if i cry?
Cry tears of sadness?
Just before you die.
Will you ever leave?
Do you actually believe?
Will you create another fear?
Will you make me heave? |
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» Comments / Feedback | by i_love_thomas (7-24-2004 - 02:34 PM)
hey I liked your poem except there are 13 questions! |
by Trapezium (7-24-2004 - 02:38 PM)
nope because one of them is to me:P |
by Morbid Angel (7-24-2004 - 02:53 PM)
by inky mirror (7-24-2004 - 03:14 PM)
it's a lost love... it makes me sad. but you put it in words quite nicely |
by vampire_princess (7-24-2004 - 05:14 PM)
that is a very sweet poem.....its very well written....i hope some day my poetry can be at least close to the amount of greatness in your poems.... |
by bathed_in_sin (7-25-2004 - 05:39 PM)
by Psycho_Penguin (7-26-2004 - 06:15 AM)
Yep... you got it... Wonderfully written! |
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