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Together or not
written by Cut_Wrist_Risk10:33 AM 3/15/05I miss how close we were,
and the things that we would do.
I remember every spoken word,
and how happy I was with you.
Breaking up wasen't all that bad,
im actually glad that it occured.
The thing I regret was making you sad,
but now I know you better.
You're closer to me now that when we were dating,
but I still hope we can be us again.
I pray our realationship wont begin fading,
and together or not will be friends. |
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TiM
dont fuckin read if ur not gunna fuckin comment im dead fuckin serious you fuckin fuckins! hehehe
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| » Comments / Feedback | by Dianesjewels (3-15-2005 - 03:08 PM)
| The poem is shaky; you need to work on your meter. The thought is not bad though, but you need to edit and correct your spelling mistakes. It shows common courtesy to your audience. It shows attention. |
by Cut_Wrist_Risk (3-15-2005 - 07:06 PM)
| Thanks but as I said b4....the only thing that matters about apoem is the feeling....everything else is useless. |
by Tainted_Soul_777 (3-16-2005 - 12:45 AM)
| thats good,im glad you an tim are getting alone now adn you dont have a grave on you yahoo icon with his name on it or somethnig that someone would do for a certian person named cody... |
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