» Poem: A Song For Us Freaks |
A Song For Us Freaks
written by frotofski_LaVey11:20 PM 3/15/05GIVE ME/LOVE
SHOW ME/HATE
CALL ME/FREAK
MAKE ME/BLEED
TELL ME/LIES
ALL HOPE/DIES
IVE ALWAYS ONLY WANTED THIS
PLAGUE ME/i suffer now
YOU TELL ME/well i tell you this
FUCK YOU/i cant love again
FOREVER/see how it is you killed me
WRIST & BLADE/a common compound
SHIT FOR BRAINS/a lower lifeform
PICK ON ME/you'll know the passings
FOLLOW ME/i'll take you with me |
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This is what many of us have wanted to scream into everyone's fucking faces. [ View frotofski_LaVey's Profile ] [ Go to the Poetry Portal ] This Poem has been viewed 350 times
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» Comments / Feedback | by Cut_Wrist_Risk (3-15-2005 - 11:26 PM)
This is an excelent poem and has an amazing flow! especially the first part! bravo!-CaSsY |
by Dianesjewels (3-16-2005 - 12:24 AM)
You took poetic license; good job. Your content is so-so, but you used language as art to make poetry. |
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