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Sudden nigth
written by Firequeen04:53 PM 3/17/05Sudden nigth
in despite
beelding river
sends a shiver
down your spine
for a moment mine |
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Author's footnotes and comments on this Poem:
This poem came to me in a pretty silly way, was playing showoff for the teacher and writing some stuff i know by heart to impress him. Than i though, hmm poem, started writing and before i even knew what i was doing i had written this.. lolz
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| » Comments / Feedback | by Dianesjewels (3-17-2005 - 05:01 PM)
| Hmm? Questions...What was sudden about the night? What do you mean by "in despite"? I understand the bleeding river...but how was the moment at the end, "mine" ? I think all these questions could be answered if you continued with this poem. |
by Firequeen (3-17-2005 - 06:13 PM)
| hmm.. i might make a part2 than lolz |
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