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I miss you already
written by Cut_Wrist_Risk11:04 PM 3/18/05Best friend means my friend which is best.
You have always been important none the less.
Being apart from you for a while,
is like a smiley face without the smile.
You are the better half of me,
the part that makes me complete.
You are my one and only,
Now that you are about to leave...
you're not even gone and I miss you already. |
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Author's footnotes and comments on this Poem:
AHHH KALIE I MISS YOU!!!!!!!
tainted_soul_777
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| » Comments / Feedback | by last_only (3-18-2005 - 11:06 PM)
| kick ass. i love it, reminds me of, yea, never ind. |
by Xsucker4loveX (3-18-2005 - 11:08 PM)
| really good. reminds me or my 24 hr ex b/f... i really miss him and yeh... this kiks @$$. |
by Stained_With_Life (3-18-2005 - 11:10 PM)
| Really Good Poem (I really like the smily face without a smile, I know it's supposed to be sad but it made me laugh) - in a good way |
by eminem_lover (3-18-2005 - 11:15 PM)
| dude..r u trying to make people brake down crying??this really reminds me of my soul mate...he's my former friend |
by xXlove+hateXx (3-19-2005 - 12:02 AM)
| dude, u made me cry, me and my best friend "broke up" and im simply uncomplete w/ out her, great job! |
by Tainted_Soul_777 (3-21-2005 - 12:36 AM)
| thank you so much cassy. i missed you so muhc when i was gone i prayed that nothing bad happend cause i wasnt there to make u feel better. Thanks so much. BBF lol LY Kalie |
by Spiffay (3-24-2005 - 12:02 PM)
| It made me cry because I thought of sum 1 who broke my heart |
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